22A- Elevator Pitch No 3

Link: https://youtu.be/bwigStYD3AM

Reflection:

This is my first elevator pitch I've done for this course, so I do not have my peers feedback to reflect upon.

Comments

  1. Hey, so nice job on the elevator pitch, for your first time and not having any feedback. I would recommend the typical things of just standing and moving around to be able to articulate your ideas more clearly. Once you stand up it really changes the tone of your pitch and it makes people more interested. The idea is interesting and it seems like a lot of people would really benefit from this.

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  2. Hi Andreanna,
    I am surprised that this is your first pitch but for it being the first time, I think you did good considering you had no prior feedback to work off of. I would suggest you could try do be more dynamic in your presentation in the future, and by that I mean try to move around, have natural body language and some hand movements, to keep the feel natural and engage the audience in a non-verbal way. Overall, good job.

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